A Review By Wendy
3.5 Heart-Palpitations, Ready for Action Stars * * * 1/2
This quick paced novella from Jan Meredith had a lot going
for it. It presented the question of whether a woman can allow herself some
well deserved fun without getting caught up in all the guilt.
We meet Beth Roberts who has had a quite a life journey at
only 33 years. She is an accomplished RN manager of the ER of a major hospital;
she has a son getting ready for college in a year and had a marriage which left
scars not only on her body but on her heart.
She was a senior in high school, he, a freshman in college….all
was wonderful…she got pregnant and they married. He decided the service was for
him and when he came back from Afghanistan, things changed. All of the
frustration he had before compounded with the PTSD causing him to lash out
mentally and physically. Things happened, he died and she widowed. Being devoted
to the raising of her son Drew and her career became her life.
She has had the support of her best friend, Connie. She is
egging her on to take advantage of the wedding she and Drew are working. Drew
is an accomplished photographer and has been working them at a young age. Beth
will have a suite provide all to her lonesome as Drew is going to hang out with
friends at the nearby campus of Kentucky University. Connie explains to Beth…
take this moment… find the hot guy at the wedding and bed him… enjoy your life…
it is time… find Mr. Lick-o- licious
and have some adult fun…. Beth looks at her like she is nuts… but the seed is
planted.
At the wedding, Beth over hears the gossip about a hunky Dr.
Gab North, widowed and drool worthy, from the bridesmaids while helping Drew
with his photos. As the event continues, she sees this Dr. and agrees…. Yup…. Definitely
drool worthy….
Dr. Gabriel North has been looking around as well. He spied
Beth from the get go… liked what he saw in her curvy figure and pretty face…
couldn’t quite figure out the connection to the photographer, though. He had
some sort of relationship to her and was he her brother or what…. He wanted to
find out more because for the first time in a long time… his body was telling
him he was interested. He had not been looking to play and did not do
relationships… he was still having pain from losing his wife….guilt usual took
care of his desires… but this time he wasn’t feeling that when he looked at
Beth… this time he was feel himself… primed and ready … and hoping something
could happen….
They both lock eyes… neither turns away… and the flirt games
begin… a look here … and another there… and by the reception both are thinking
they would like to meet each other and have a conversation. What opens the door
to their actually interacting is a family member has a cardiac episode at the
reception and both of them handle it together. Once the patient is sent to the
hospital and is pronounced ok to the party… they both sit down and start to
talk.
He gives a little flirt… she responds and then they give
into the sparks and kiss… both agree to go for a “drink”. During their time at a romantic bar… more
revealing conversation… more kissing and then the move to her hotel. Beth has
made the decision to have her one night stand… but she states very clearly to
Gab… this is one night- no commitments-no continuing- just this time only. Gab
agrees with his requirement… that it is real, feeling, and strong; everything
they want for that one night. Deal done.
When this tale worked… it really worked. When there were
details which distracted, unfortunately, they caused real issues for me.
The good- Jan Meredith knows how to write sexy…. I am
talking hot, steamy, wish-it-were-you sexy. Her scenes with Beth and Gab raised
the bar in the novella… it was like I was reading one story and then switch….
the real writing began; that is how great those scenes were. She also combined
intimate telling and sharing between the Dr. and Beth, giving us insight to why
they were who they were and made them likable and real. I felt the story went
to another level once she got to where she really wanted to go.
The biggest issue I had with this was from the beginning and
it threw me off for most of the story. If Beth’s son is to be senior in High
School he is 17. If Beth is 33 as stated then she was 16 when she gave birth to
Drew, meaning she was 15 or 16 when pregnant. To have her so young and then
discuss empty nest… just was hard to handle. I didn't feel the numbers worked
with how she presented them causing it to linger throughout the story for me. I
understood the character was created to be very appealing yet had lived a life.
If she had made her a little bit older it wouldn't have diminished the woman’s
hotness factor and Dr. Gab could have still been in his late thirties. Also
changing the ages would not have deterred the interest for any of her
demographics, in my opinion.
Over all, this is a quick, hot and very satisfying read with
no declarations of instant love, instead we get people who have lived lives,
met and are open to possibilities… and isn't really what all of us want… the
possibility to have just that.
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